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Beijing
A slightly retouched version. Although the 'flawed' first one didn't seem to bother the 170 people who collected or faved it in 3 days. And I did use a darkened vignette on the corners. All images are ©copyright Bart Aldrich. You may NOT use, replicate, manipulate, or modify this image without my permission. All Rights Reserved. CommentsThis is eye catching! love it!
-- Winter Spring Summer or Fall, all you have to do is call, and I'll be there yes I will, you've got a friend. [link] This is a great photograph, very eye catching and warm
I like the detail on the umbreallas, very detailed. Beautfiul work One thing i don't understand is why you have so many faves and only 3, now 4 comments =/ -- --Begin at the beginning and go on till you come to the end: then stop-- ♫♪Music Makes Me Loose Control♪♫ |
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August 24
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NIKON D300 2/100 second F/8.0 52 mm 200 Oct 15, 2008, 12:04:58 AM |
Critiques
The floral pattern gives the whole arrangement an interesting twist. I also love the fact that you chose a square format for this image because it makes it really harmonious in my opinion.
What I don't agree with is your post-production. When I see it correctly you made use of the lasso tool and then used something like a Gaussian Blur to blur the edges of the image, probably to give it more depth. I would've liked it better if you had used a slight (black) vignette to frame the image and to bring the attention of the viewer more into the center of the picture or if you had feathered the edges of your selection a little so your editing wouldn't show that much.
Overall great work, you created a pictre that will stay in the minds of the viewer with its simple beauty.
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